100 votes
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Vote: Total Votes: 100 |
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| farlitalol | Posted: 2008/11/14 22:28 Updated: 2008/11/14 22:28 |
Unzipped ![]() ![]() Joined: 2008/4/26 From: Posts: 80 |
really good start and ending would love more of it
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| smoothnudedude | Posted: 2008/3/23 9:17 Updated: 2008/3/23 9:17 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/11/5 From: Posts: 13 |
Very similar to "The Neighbor", almost the same characters. Good story, goo
d writing.
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| LoveLikeWinter | Posted: 2007/1/21 21:04 Updated: 2007/1/21 21:04 |
Tease ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/12/29 From: Posts: 44 |
I like it a lot. It had a certain depth that I like a lot. A little bit more of building the characters would be a little nicer but I liked it a lot.
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| redhotcasper | Posted: 2006/9/28 19:33 Updated: 2006/9/28 19:33 |
Tease ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/7/25 From: Australia Posts: 24 |
every neighbours dream!
Redhotcasper
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| wound666 | Posted: 2006/7/27 16:55 Updated: 2006/7/27 16:55 |
Unzipped ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/6/27 From: Lexington, KY Posts: 110 |
i like it.
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