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Serial Stories: Shelter, Part 4 (1/3) 
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Author: bibeast  Published: 7/28/2008  story views: 438


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This part is a lot different than in the movie the scenes are in different orders just because I thought it flows better this way. Sorry about the ending of part 3 but Zach was in denial about his feelings after the kiss and he spent most of his time awake until it got late and he was tired.

Zach woke up the following morning and saw that Shaun was asleep so he slowly got up from the lounge chair and looked for his keys.

Once Zach was in his car driving back home, he was incomplete shock not knowing what hit him, from the night before. He couldn’t think about the kiss if he liked it or if he didn’t. Zach was so confused about the whole thing. He thought about what would Gabe, his best friend would think about him and Shaun kissing. He thought about Jeanne and little Cody finding out and he thought about his girlfriend Tori. What the hell was he thinking, he should have stopped Shaun but Shaun’s lips on his just felt so right at the time but maybe it was all those beers that he had before the kiss.

Zach walked into the door and Jeanne was looking pissed off.

“Where the hell were you?” asked Jeanne in a pissed off tone of voice.

“Out surfing.”

“All night?”

“Yeah what the fuck.”

Later on that night after Zach dropped off Jeanne at her job. Zach saw Tori coming out of her car and he walked up to her and tried to kiss her on the lips but she just pushed him away and walked away from him.

A few days later Zach was at the beach getting ready to surf for the first time since Shaun had kissed him. While getting ready some hot hunk was checking Zach out and Zach was checking him out and the hottie gave him a wink and Zack looked away. The next thing to happen was he saw Shaun at the beach, who was walking up to him.

“Hey, I tried calling you,” said Shaun.

“Yeah and.”

“I just wanted to….”

“What?” screamed out Zach.

“I just wanted to say…”

“Just drop it dude” said Zach.

“Okay,” with that said Shaun walked away.

Shaun walked over to Tori, who was playing in the sand with Cody.

“I need help, I need help,” said Cody to Tori about making a sand castle.

“Hey Tori” said Shaun.

“Hey Shaun. This is Cody.”

“Hey Cody,” said Shaun while shaking Cody’s hand.

“I need help, I need help.”

Shaun kneeled down to Cody’s level.

“I’ll help buddy.’

Zach walked over to Tori. Zach had a pissed off look on his face while looking at Shaun.

“Zach I think we need to talk,” said Tori.

“Okay let me get Cody.”

“Let him stay Shaun is great with him.”

“Hey you guys go, it’s cool,” said Shaun.

“We’ll be back in a second,” said Tori to Cody and Shaun.

Zach and Tori walked away to talk about their relationship.

“Shaun is really good with Cody,” said Tori.

They both looked at Cody having fun with Shaun.

“Sorry about the other day, there’s just been so much on my mind lately” said Zach.

“If you don’t want us to be together, don’t pull that shit with me, just let me know.”

“Okay.”

“If it’s what you
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Gaydreamer1404
Posted: 2008/10/5 15:12  Updated: 2008/10/5 15:12
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 wow!!!
i love what you did to the story.