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Serial Stories: Shelter, Part 3 (1/4) 
 10 votes
Author: bibeast  Published: 7/23/2008  story views: 829


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I hope everyone who’s reading this is enjoying it. A couple of things you should know is that I changed some of the story around from what it’s like in the film and another thing is I changed some of the dialogue for it to make sense. This part of the story is going to be the longest. Well with that in mind sit back and relax.

Much later on that same night, Zach was over at his girlfriend’s house eating popcorn and watching a horror movie with Tori. Tori kept moving closer to Zach but he wouldn’t do anything. Tori kissed Zack’s neck and Zach moved his head so that he could kiss her lips. He put his fingers in her hair and kissed her some more. He ended the kiss and Tori went down to kiss him again but he moved his head and ate more popcorn. Zach looked deep into thought as if he was thinking of Shaun. Tori got up from the couch.

“Hey come back here,” said Zack grabbing on to Tori’s hand, for her to sit back down on the couch.

“No, I’m tired I’m going to bed.”

“Good night.”

Once Tori left the room Zach relaxed on the couch ate his popcorn and finished watching the movie.

It was about 2:00 in the morning at Gabe’s Mansion. Shaun was moving around in bed, he couldn’t sleep for Zach was on his mind. Shaun looked around the mansion for something. He didn’t know what but what he found was an old DVD. He lay down in bed and put it on. On the DVD were Zach and Gabe. It was a how to video on how to skateboard. Shaun couldn’t keep his eyes off Zach. Every time that Zach was on the screen Shaun would have a huge smile upon his full lips. Shaun was growing an erection and he put his hand down his pants and grabbed on to his dick and jerked off. Once Zach was off the screen Shaun cleaned his hand and found an old walkie-talkie from underneath the bed.

At the same time at Zack’s place, Zach heard a noise. Zach looked all over his room not knowing where that sound was coming from. Zach saw his walkie-talkie on his nightstand and picked it up; he then walked back over to his bed and lied down.

Back at Gabe’s place, Shaun was sitting up in bed with the walkie-talkie in his hand and he was still watching that video with Zach in it.

“Hello, hello, is anyone out there?” said Shaun into the walkie-talkie.

There wasn’t an answer back so Shaun put the walkie-talkie down on the bed.

At Zach’s place he heard Shaun say help, hello.

“Helloooooooooooooo,” said Zach in a scary voice.

Shaun heard the reply and he got scared. He grabbed the walkie-talkie.

“Who the fuck is this?” asked Shaun.

“It’s your worst nightmare,” said Zach laughing hard. Hearing the sound of Zach’s laugh made Shaun laugh and smile like a young boy with a crush.

“Where the hell did you find that?” asked Zach.

“It was under the bed.”

“That’s awesome, I remember Gabe and me on these things for hours.”

“I can’t believe it reaches all the way to your house.”

“Yeah, all the way to the ghetto.”

“I forgot to tell you earlier that I saw some of your tags today, they were sweet I like how you’re using cranes now.”
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bibeast
Posted: 2008/7/24 15:19  Updated: 2008/7/24 15:19
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Joined: 2006/10/18
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 Re: Shelter 3
well for me im not a guy and im 26 years old.
sdfrenchie
Posted: 2008/7/24 3:59  Updated: 2008/7/24 3:59
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/12/30
From: San Diego
Posts: 165
 Shelter 3
So, what did you do for fun after your ex- fell asleep, bard? This author seems very young and it's kinda sweet how he's teasing us into the relationship between Zach and Shaun. Hopefully in part 4 we'll find ou t if Shaun attacked him in his sleep!
bibeast
Posted: 2008/7/24 3:08  Updated: 2008/7/24 3:08
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 Re: At the critical moment...
Zach is in denial about what his feeling at the moment.
bardohio
Posted: 2008/7/23 22:45  Updated: 2008/7/23 22:47
Stuck on Sticky
Joined: 2006/12/10
From: NE Ohio
Posts: 670
 At the critical moment...
...when "Shaun wants it as much as he [Zach] does..." - Zach falls asleep? How romantic! Such a hot lover! I had an ex-wife do that to me once - that's partly wh y she's an 'ex-'!