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| starbuck11 | Posted: 2007/7/8 17:33 Updated: 2007/7/8 17:33 |
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Your comment was extremely well thought of!
To me it shows you also have had practice!
starbuck11
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| DeathTeller | Posted: 2006/9/22 14:53 Updated: 2006/9/22 14:53 |
Up and Comer ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/8/28 From: Virginia Posts: 167 |
Habu, all of your stories have a 'density' to them that really makes them feel full, like a true event as opposed to just the recounting of a series of scenes. You do an excellent job of 'lingering in the moment', moving from inconsequential steps in the plot quickly, and then spending a lot of time and detail on the 'juicy' scenes. Pacing like that is something that only comes with practice, and it's evident that you've had a lot of it! I always enjoy reading your stuff. Keep it coming!
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| WichitaSeven | Posted: 2006/9/22 14:46 Updated: 2006/9/22 14:46 |
Up and Comer ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/8/28 From: Kansas Posts: 174 |
I've been hanging on every word of this series ever since the sexy young businessman first got on the plane with CJ.
I damn near creamed myself when he fastened his cock ring around both their cocks and tied them together! and i was reading this from the University library... so that would have sucked!
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