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Romantic: Chesapeake Night (2/12) 
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Author: Keyboardman  Published: 11/1/2007  story views: 5598


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vivid depths that dazzled and the air ruffled your skin just enough to make you stop and take notice.

And I had taken notice. The light wind played with Kent’s blonde hair as he folded his arms across his chest and just gazed out over the bay. He was one of those men that had always easily been noticed, but the boyish looks and the charming dimples had changed. Before while adorable, he was one of many young men with teeny bopper cover looks and a white smile. Now, despite the scars of quiet pain, when those dark blue eyes turned to you, he took your breath away.

We had cleaned up the table and wandered back out on the pier, drawn to the sparkle of the water and the song of cicadas. We sat there side by side, legs dangling over the edge, sipping our wine and drinking in the good company and the sweetness of the soon to be fall night.

In the distance music played, the old stuff; music that eased you into it and unleashed your senses slowly and seductively. Kent leaned back on his arms and smiled. “What a perfect night.”

I sipped the last of my red and nodded. “Getting cooler now…won’t be spending too many more nights out here.”

“Great cuddle weather, though.”

“Oh god yeah…” I closed my eyes and remembered, god how I remembered. “I miss that. I bought flannel sheets, but that only helps a little.”

Kent put an arm around my shoulder and slapped his hand on my chest. “You really need to find someone Joe. You weren’t meant to be alone.”

I chuckled to myself. “It would be nice my friend, but I’m not going to hold my breath.” Kent nodded his head and looked at the water below our feet. “And what about you, buddy? Me thinks I heard the pot call the kettle black.”

“Oh man, I gave up forever ago. My needs have changed. I’m too private now, and women…please don’t get me wrong, I love women…but relationships with the ladies mean a lack of privacy. It’s a natural thing…”

“Two become one…”

“I’m too closed off, I may never be ready for that kind of intimacy again. It makes me uncomfortable. I’m more comfortable with what we have.”

“Plus, I’m a cheap date.”

Kent laughed. I was so drawn to that laugh; the little dimples of his youth were now deeper and longer, teasing you to fall in them when he laughed. “Listen...” he said. “Hear that?”

I cocked my head to match his. “What? The music?”

“Yeah. What’s that song?” He bobbed his head and sang “Dah dah dah dah duh dah…” I love that!” He stood up and began to sway to the music, moving his feet and his hips gently swirling an invisible partner around the invisible dance floor. It was the Four Seasons and “Can’t Take My Eyes Off of You.” I couldn’t resist. I stood up and joined him, dancing with my own long gone invisible partner.

Before we knew it we were dancing together on the end of the pier, at first just swaying together to the far off sound of Tony Bennett, then to Vicki Carr. By the time Michael Buble’s voice could be heard on the water, I had placed my hands around Kent’s back and his hands gently took my waist and we
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sirnoeld
Posted: 2009/5/21 23:28  Updated: 2009/5/21 23:28
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 Wow...
Simply wow.... truly one of the best stories I've read here... I only hope that I will some day find my true love and experience love-making as it was meant to be....
starbuck11
Posted: 2007/12/27 9:46  Updated: 2007/12/27 9:46
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 Re: Hail the Conquering Hero...
Bardohio ... The stories that I have read of yours are just as amazing and so good! Keep up the great work, and thank you for sharing them too Josh nic name starbuck11
starbuck11
Posted: 2007/12/27 9:42  Updated: 2007/12/27 9:43
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 Chesapeak Night
Amazing is an understatement! I am lost for words as you have such a wonder ful art in painting a picture! Thanks for sharing. Josh
dhamphere90
Posted: 2007/12/26 12:25  Updated: 2007/12/26 12:25
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 Damn
I agree with these other writers, I can't even compare to your writing. the re is a reason that you this story is the story of the week, and I think yo u deserve much more. You capture all emotions, and your characters communic ate with glances what I can't get across in paragraphs. Keep up the amazing work!
bardohio
Posted: 2007/11/3 22:55  Updated: 2007/11/3 22:55
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 Hail the Conquering Hero...
...this is the best story I've ever read - here or anywhere else. My own w ords fail me to describe how your words have moved me...
Keyboardman
Posted: 2007/11/3 21:31  Updated: 2007/11/3 21:31
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Thanks, but hardly a masterpiece. I just like figuring how to put simple w ords together to create complex moods and emotions. I've read your work, y ou do the same thing and just as well if not better.
Keyboardman
Posted: 2007/11/3 21:30  Updated: 2007/11/3 21:30
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 Re: Damn
Oh please! I am very flattered, but I'm just getting started. It's me that should just chuck it all, but I'm a stubborn little cuss and won't stop un til I'm happy with it. Dare you to do the same!
Keyboardman
Posted: 2007/11/3 21:28  Updated: 2007/11/3 21:28
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 Re: My hero!
This one's just from my head. And congratulations on the story of the week & month selection. You deserve it!
Keyboardman
Posted: 2007/11/3 21:27  Updated: 2007/11/3 21:27
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 Re: You Did It Again!
Yeah, well, we're even...you're pic makes me speechless...thanks for the co mment
Keyboardman
Posted: 2007/11/3 21:26  Updated: 2007/11/3 21:26
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 Re: Yeah!
Thanks, but then it's Saturday night and I'm home reading the comments on m y story...what the heck if I in't livin' it. might as well read about it. A nyone got the new "People"?
CuriousManNY
Posted: 2007/11/3 10:35  Updated: 2007/11/3 10:35
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 Once again...
Another masterpiece!
2guysnack
Posted: 2007/11/2 21:18  Updated: 2007/11/2 21:18
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 Damn
That's it. I give up my keyboard. I could never capture your words and feel ings.
Hemingway
Posted: 2007/11/2 19:44  Updated: 2007/11/2 19:44
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 My hero!
As I said last time, Dude, you are the man! If this story is in any way ba sed on truth, you've had a challenging life and deserve some good lovin'. Kudos!
TuDestino
Posted: 2007/11/2 15:27  Updated: 2007/11/2 15:27
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 You Did It Again!
Wow...I'm speechless and with a big mess ;) That was the best story I've re ad on here!
papito
Posted: 2007/11/2 15:17  Updated: 2007/11/2 15:17
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 Yeah!
"How sweet it is to be loved by you."