34 votes
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| Haylyn | Posted: 2008/4/4 8:28 Updated: 2008/4/4 8:28 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/10/2 From: New Jersey Posts: 1 |
I don't think you had any reason to be nervous at all. I thought that your
story was great. Very well written, I love especially how ou captured such
emotion. The passion seemed very realistic.
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| Nude | Posted: 2008/4/1 5:29 Updated: 2008/4/1 5:29 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2008/1/23 From: Australia Posts: 17 |
I was really nervous to post this story because I think it's been one of my
better efforts and any comments you have would be great.
The next installment will (I hope) get the blood pumping, so check it out w
hen it's published.
Nude
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