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First Time: Marine Home on Leave (5/5) 
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Author: rumpranger2  Published: 2/11/2008  story views: 2455


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signboards. Everyone at the table was nodding in agreement and saying yes. The old man said that if we wanted to go the three of us boys needed to plan on devoting a full day at the shop getting the motor home serviced and ready. We all agreed that would be no problem. Ronny said that he wanted to take the bikes out for some cross-country riding before he left. Brandon seconded that. Mrs. Driver asked who wanted pie and what type.

There were two different pies: cherry and apple. Mrs. Driver said that there was ice cream to top the pie off or whipped cream. Everyone opted for ice cream. Ronny and I decided on cherry pie. Mrs. Driver sat two large pieces of cherry pie a la mode in front of us. We both tore into the pie and ice cream with gusto. After desert everyone excused themselves. Brandon and his sister remained behind to help clear the table and wash dishes. Mr. Driver excused himself to smoke his pipe on the back deck, while Ronny and I went out to the garage.


Let me know if you think this story line needs to advance further or should I end it as a short story? E-mail me if you want to see me continue the story line or if you want to make suggestions. If I don’t get any feedback from readers on my stories I tend to drop them quickly.
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sdfrenchie
Posted: 2008/2/16 11:13  Updated: 2008/2/16 11:13
Up and Comer
Joined: 2007/12/30
From: San Diego
Posts: 165
 Marine
You have to continue it. You can't just leave us hanging like this! Make us feel that Marine's cock as though we were all Garys.
brislyland
Posted: 2008/2/14 20:22  Updated: 2008/2/14 20:22
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 next xhapter heading Cream pie as well
Fantastic build up adn not much happened. Go for it and lets see the next course and then there is the nascar experience lots to work with there. Well done
Hyperion
Posted: 2008/2/13 4:49  Updated: 2008/2/13 4:49
Virgin
Joined: 2008/1/19
From: SW Ohio
Posts: 15
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this was great! please continue
bardohio
Posted: 2008/2/13 1:46  Updated: 2008/2/13 1:46
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Joined: 2006/12/10
From: NE Ohio
Posts: 670
 As always in this Life...
...GO FOR IT!!!
edward32
Posted: 2008/2/12 15:26  Updated: 2008/2/12 15:26
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 Marine
Go ahead and write afew more chapters, really spice it up and write more st ories. This had started out great. Best of luck.
fastperson
Posted: 2008/2/12 1:34  Updated: 2008/2/12 1:34
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 Re: loved it
what is this persons email i would like to email him
paws1940
Posted: 2008/2/11 18:35  Updated: 2008/2/11 18:35
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 loved it
love the story wished it was me there