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I turned to face him and my breathing became slow and exaggerated. He slowly took my glasses off and his face came into view without the streaks from my failed attempt of drying them. Usually he smile is wide and his perfectly white teeth are bright and showing but this time he was smiling with a closed mouth and there was something very sensual about only seeing his lips. “You smell like fruit” Where those words coming out of my mouth? My mouth did move and I knew I was thinking it but I still wasn’t sure if I had said them. He smiled bigger and stepped just a bit closer. He was almost right against me. I couldn’t breathe and my body refused to move. I’m pretty sure time all together just stopped. That’s impossible I told myself. Time just doesn’t stop but I swear that I was stuck in that millisecond, no smaller than that…a billisecond? As I was contemplating that thought I noticed that his head seemed to be getting closer. My eyes grew wide and my mouth opened a little bit as his head slowly and smoothly dodged mine and went towards the nap in my neck. My eyes closed as I felt his now wet hair brush up against my cheek as he breathed in. “You smell fresh, like the rain” he whispered. I’m pretty sure that if I hadn’t been stuck in time and my body wasn’t frozen where it stood I would have fallen to the ground of shock. The next sensation I felt were his lips pressed gently onto my neck. I could breathe again and my lungs were quickly filled with the life giving oxygen and my body relaxed as his head removed itself from my neck to stare once again into my eyes.
I was panting, very much like
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| Addiena_Saffir | Posted: 2009/8/28 1:42 Updated: 2009/8/28 1:42 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2009/8/28 From: wouldn't you like to know Posts: 2 |
Considering how much i enjoy being a woman. The biggest compliment i can t
hink of is this story made me wish to be a man and have such a hot first ti
me. *sigh*
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| bardohio | Posted: 2009/6/28 20:45 Updated: 2009/6/28 20:45 |
Stuck on Sticky ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/12/10 From: NE Ohio Posts: 817 |
Such a long story, and so light, and so delicately teasing, and brought on
such a prolonged climax! Luv it!
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| dhamphere90 | Posted: 2009/6/10 18:49 Updated: 2009/6/10 18:49 |
Tease ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/5/12 From: Covington, WA Posts: 30 |
I know that isn't very articulate, but that is the only way I can describe
my reaction to your masterpiece I have just read. It had a very romantic to
ne to it, but also did a good job of conveying the sexual thrill without ru
ining that romance. Bravo, bravo, bravisimo!
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| papito | Posted: 2009/6/10 6:59 Updated: 2009/6/10 6:59 |
Tease ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/11/2 From: Posts: 30 |
Unbelievably well done. Thanks. Looking forward to your next masterpiece.
Can't praise this enough.
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| jel572 | Posted: 2009/6/10 1:19 Updated: 2009/6/10 1:19 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/10/8 From: New York Posts: 16 |
dude that was one of the hotest stories i have read in a long time. i love
all the details and i hope you write more. i'm so fucken hard right now i
have to cum.
Hot hot hot
jel572@aol.com
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