89 votes
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Vote: Total Votes: 89 |
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| chadli_87 | Posted: 2008/4/6 19:09 Updated: 2008/4/6 19:09 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2008/2/2 From: Loogootee, IN, USA Posts: 16 |
hot hot hot!
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| brislyland | Posted: 2008/1/20 19:32 Updated: 2008/1/20 19:32 |
Unzipped ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/12/2 From: Posts: 61 |
This is great writing, The suspense, tension and build up as great and I f
elt like i was Brian experincing it all.
Well done. Is there more?
M
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| Jax Riley | Posted: 2007/11/19 20:49 Updated: 2007/11/19 20:49 |
Unzipped ![]() Joined: 2007/4/16 From: Boston, MA Posts: 94 |
<evil grin> Glad you liked it...I have to build tension and keep you turnin
g the page, right? :-)
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| blueyed3579 | Posted: 2007/11/17 14:18 Updated: 2007/11/17 14:18 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/11/3 From: new york, new york Posts: 17 |
You teased us for the first 5 pages. I wanted to know when it would happen.
Great story
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| unicorn918 | Posted: 2007/10/11 8:48 Updated: 2007/10/11 8:48 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/10/11 From: Posts: 2 |
Well written and draws your forward. Nice job Jax!
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| bardohio | Posted: 2007/9/24 20:42 Updated: 2007/9/24 20:42 |
Stuck on Sticky ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/12/10 From: NE Ohio Posts: 817 |
...when it first came out! Hot! Hot! Hot!
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