102 votes
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Vote: Total Votes: 102 |
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| cdnair | Posted: 2010/8/21 14:13 Updated: 2010/8/21 14:13 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2010/2/23 From: Posts: 2 |
Don't get me wrong; this was very well-written, and arousing, but I actuall
y felt really dirty in getting aroused. Andre seems to be this nasty 65 yea
r old, hairy man who's just violated Jason. Not to mention that both Jason
and William- especially William seems like a slave. I didn't like that Jaso
n didn't seem to like any of it, as, like the other poster commented, this
was more like rape than consensual.
This is more like a really bad dream that I'd have- one that would leave me
in tears.
But, then again, I didn't write it. And it was VERY well written :)
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| RomanticGuy45 | Posted: 2010/7/8 6:05 Updated: 2010/7/8 6:05 |
Tease ![]() ![]() Joined: 2010/4/18 From: Yakima, Posts: 24 |
I loved this story!! It was so erotically seductive and Masterfully told!!
I truly hope that you'll continue this erotically Beautiful story.
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| farlitalol | Posted: 2009/5/5 9:43 Updated: 2009/5/5 9:43 |
Unzipped ![]() ![]() Joined: 2008/4/26 From: Posts: 104 |
it was amazing! really got me hard
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| patrick696 | Posted: 2009/5/4 7:52 Updated: 2009/5/4 7:52 |
Tease ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/4/21 From: MODESTO, CALIF. Posts: 37 |
I wish I could have been initiated like that! WOW
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| wolfbury | Posted: 2009/4/22 10:21 Updated: 2009/4/22 10:21 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/12/30 From: UK Posts: 6 |
We need MORE please
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| chockfull | Posted: 2008/7/3 18:15 Updated: 2008/7/3 18:15 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2008/7/3 From: AZ Posts: 1 |
This one is excellent! It really makes me want to lose my own virginity...
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| cutehornyvirgin | Posted: 2008/6/30 1:49 Updated: 2008/6/30 1:49 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2008/6/30 From: Auckland Posts: 4 |
Very sexy, as a willing virgin with a nice ass I hope my first lover is as
appreciative. Hot story!!
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| joystick | Posted: 2008/5/16 9:20 Updated: 2008/5/16 9:20 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/6/22 From: Jersey Posts: 14 |
Rape!!!! Rape is when one party says "NO!". If I remember no one said NO. S
tory is pure seduction... Wonderfully written and masterly told.
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| velvetmember | Posted: 2008/4/13 17:24 Updated: 2008/4/13 17:24 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2008/4/13 From: Posts: 1 |
i agree, woud be nicer if he was enjoying it. this dint seem much like maki
ng love def more like rape.
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| 2guysnack | Posted: 2008/3/30 21:00 Updated: 2008/3/30 21:00 |
Tease ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/1/24 From: All over the place Posts: 23 |
especially one who was trained properly!
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| bardohio | Posted: 2008/3/30 17:29 Updated: 2008/3/30 17:29 |
Stuck on Sticky ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/12/10 From: NE Ohio Posts: 821 |
...that I'd ever been cute enough to be offered a job as a whore!
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| 2guysnack | Posted: 2008/3/30 14:34 Updated: 2008/3/30 14:34 |
Tease ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/1/24 From: All over the place Posts: 23 |
Yow! More please, perhaps each chapter set in 24 hours?
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| smoothnudedude | Posted: 2008/3/27 15:17 Updated: 2008/3/27 15:17 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/11/5 From: Posts: 13 |
That was a great introduction..., but I kept hoping Jason would eventually
start to enjoy his training. It seemed to much like rape which I find dist
asteful.
I do look forward to more and hope Jason starts to enjoy his work.
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| barney bear | Posted: 2008/3/26 22:05 Updated: 2008/3/26 22:05 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2008/3/15 From: Posts: 9 |
yea got me so hot too. I want 2 week holiday there
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| Martin1766 | Posted: 2008/3/26 11:42 Updated: 2008/3/26 11:42 |
Tease ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/7/9 From: Posts: 26 |
What an erotic story beautifully written. It makes you want to book a room
even if only virtually.
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