157 votes
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Vote: Total Votes: 157 |
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| Cobblewood | Posted: 2008/12/21 22:45 Updated: 2008/12/21 22:45 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/10/26 From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada Posts: 7 |
In telling this tale, it could have been easy to allow the protagonist to b
ecome unduly sidetracked at any of his encounters along the way, but you ha
ve stayed focused on his journey. This make for a very good story. – Cob
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| starbuck11 | Posted: 2008/7/6 15:37 Updated: 2008/7/6 15:37 |
Unzipped ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/7/7 From: Posts: 136 |
Ned, this is a hot story ... my juices are flowing. Keep on writing, would
like to read more
Josh
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| farlitalol | Posted: 2008/5/19 11:41 Updated: 2008/5/19 11:41 |
Unzipped ![]() ![]() Joined: 2008/4/26 From: Posts: 102 |
nice story i wish that i would experience that much sucking in my life too.
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| wattanin | Posted: 2007/9/21 10:10 Updated: 2007/9/21 10:10 |
Virgin ![]() ![]() Joined: 2007/9/19 From: Posts: 16 |
i do like your story. hope that i would have that same kind of your experie
nces! thanks.
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| bardohio | Posted: 2007/8/23 21:21 Updated: 2007/8/23 21:21 |
Stuck on Sticky ![]() ![]() Joined: 2006/12/10 From: NE Ohio Posts: 734 |
..."It's a long, long road...with many a winding curve..." Keep on traveli
ng - you never know what might be waiting for you just around the next bend
!
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